A Haiku


Sorrow abounds there.
Caused by furious water.
Lives torn asunder forever.

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6 responses to “A Haiku

  1. It’s just too sad for words 😦

  2. I missed this, this morning. If you want to follow a strict 5-7-5 format, delete the “forever.”

    (It might sound a bit more hopeful that way).

  3. Pingback: Haiku or Senryū? « Spirit Lights The Way

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